Mar 11, 2019

My mission to Mars


Boom, thunder and Lightning!!! I was getting ready for the First day of school. We just moved in from New York to California. My dad is a billionaire and my mom is a robotics inventor. As always, when you move you lose all of your friends. It was a new school. It was time for me to run for the bus, I ran across the wet grass and got in the bus. Once I arrived, I saw something really strange that looked like a space ship. I wanted to take a closer look at it, but the bell rang. I had to go for the class. I had been thinking about the weird kind of flying thing. Before recess there was a note under my desk. I had never seen it before. It said you had been chosen to be part of the amazing hero to come to space. I could not believe my eyes. It said to meet at the school mascot which was a eagle. As I ran threw the field at recess to the school mascot I saw a group of people. The leader of the team said, "I have been watching you since you were born. You seem to be very responsible." Another person said "you were the only one in the world that noticed us." Then the leader said, "we are giving you a chance to go to Mars and explore. Would you like to join us?" I froze in excitement and said yes. The recess bell rang. I told them that I have to be back in class and ran away. I faked to be sick and got out of the class and went near the spaceship. The leader handed me a neon pink space suit. I got in the space ship and I got to sit in the front. The numbers were counted 10, 9, 8, 7,6,4,3,2,1, blast off. Then the ship went straight up. I screamed and then stopped. Few things came to my mind. One such thing is due to zero gravity, you will be floating. I wanted to test it. So, I decided to take off my seat belt. Once I did I started to float around. It was so cool. A couple of hours, I explored. Then I took a long nap. When I woke up, I saw Mars. I was so excited to be the first person in the galaxy called The milky way. Finally the ship landed and the leader told me I should be the the first one to get out of the ship. I was so so thrilled and I looked at every one. They nodded and agreed. I stepped on the planet and was so happy to explore on something that I have never explored. When I stepped on Mars it was so rocky on one side and on the other side it was really smooth. Then I freely flied around the planet. I bounced around so high I can almost touch a star. It was time to go. I got into my seat and went straight down it was so fast. After we landed I waved good bye and gave each and every one of them a big hug. I knew I was going to get in trouble by my parents. I knocked on the door. Both my parents were staring at me. I looked behind me. But the space ship had already took off. I tried to explain my adventure to my parents. They thought I was cooking up stories. Now it's my turn to get time out. Ta da! No electronics for the rest of the month. I would only get to touch electronics if it was a project or home work. But, it's ok. Those times were good at Mars and will always be my precious memories.


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    Mar 16, 2019 04:35 AM

    Thomas P.

    Great story!

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    Mar 17, 2019 02:52 PM

    Janya Jakan

    Thank you😀

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