May 15, 2019

The HAUNTED HOUSE of secrets - chapter one

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hey guys! so today's story is a shout out to Emily Gorman, one of my friends and followers, who requested me to write on this interesting and wonderful topic. thank you Emily! i request u to follow her since her stories and poems are amazing. u can check one out at : https://littlewriter.io/stories/2166.


so, as per her request, this story is about me and my friends getting stuck in a old house and discovering its creepy secrets. Are u getting goose bumps already? cuz i am !


one day , me and my friends Esme and Clara were having a picnic by the forest. we were chatting, eating by the pond, playing games, you know, your typical picnic. it was after noon , and we were getting bored , so we decided to roam around a bit. we had been roaming for quite a while, so we decided to go back. but as we were, our surroundings changed. after a while, we were at a forklift. We took a right. then, things started to go wrong. We were walking, when Esme tripped and scrapped her knee badly. she was hardly able to walk. we had to carry her in between our shoulders.


Soon, we came up on a creepy old house. the windows were broken , the gate was pointy and rusty, the bricks were chipped, and the plants were withering.yet, we had to go in since it was our only hope for directions or shelter. plus, Esme was exhausted. so we went inside. when we opened the door, a gust of wind came out with many bats. we were scared , but we stepped in. there was broken furniture and glass all over. there were also......... AHHHHHHHH! some bloody hand prints.we were so scared that we ran towards the staircase in front of us. Suddenly, Esme , who had got hurt, fell and screamed in pain. we rushed towards her. she said slowly'' help me'' and fainted. we decided to carry her up the stair case , hoping to find a bedroom with a stable bed to let her rest on. We were going up when we found a broken board. we decided to be careful and go one by one . Clara went first , while Esme was lying beside me, still unconscious. Suddenly, when my friend stepped on it ,the board broke! she fell through, screaming. Then, a gust of wind pushed me towards it! i barely managed to grab Esme's hand and we went down together! i was screaming! AHHHHHHHHH! HELP !


....................... to be continued


see part two to know what happens next!boo hoo hoo!


and also guys, if u want to give me a topic to write about, or get a shoutout then just comment on my story a request... i will put the link in the comments section below. bye, and thanks to emily!






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    May 15, 2019 11:30 AM

    Shayna Bhattacharjee#awsomeandbestwriter❤️💎

    As i said, if u want to give me a topic, u can do so at this link: https://littlewriter.io/stories/1969. but there is one condition: follow me! just click on the follow author button and be notified whenever i post a new story, like maybe on your request and give u a shout out, or when i post about new challenges and requests . bye!

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    Jul 30, 2019 08:06 AM

    Imaiboon Chawalitruangrith

    I am already following you. but what topic?

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    May 15, 2019 11:33 AM

    Shayna Bhattacharjee#awsomeandbestwriter❤️💎

    Also guys, if u are following me, then i would definitely like to follow u so just notify me by a comment , since i always check them and reply. then i will check my followers list, and if u are there, i will follow u . bye !

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    May 15, 2019 02:09 PM

    #theamazingandbest… AADYA!🥰🥳💃🏻🏃🏻‍♀️

    can u write a story on how terrible u r? that's not a question but a command, u HAVE to do it!

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    May 15, 2019 06:25 PM

    Shayna Bhattacharjee#awsomeandbestwriter❤️💎

    Aadya, i dont mean to be rude but u shouldn't make hurtful comments like this cuz it hurts people maybe u meant it as a joke or sarcasam but its not funny.

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    May 15, 2019 06:27 PM

    Shayna Bhattacharjee#awsomeandbestwriter❤️💎

    and i cant write a story on that cuz me and my TRUE friends dont think i am terrible cuz i am not in most people's perspective maybe in urs but majority wins

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    May 16, 2019 02:01 PM

    Sumitra Shah #thebestlittlewriteralso best

    Who are you to demand her to write such a hurtful to her

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    May 17, 2019 06:58 AM

    Jessica Bezuidenhout

    I don't think it is very nice of you to talk to your friend like that...It could cause damage and break up your friendship...I hope you can understand my perspective

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    May 15, 2019 06:28 PM

    Shayna Bhattacharjee#awsomeandbestwriter❤️💎

    And also, there are certain topics for requests which maybe u have not seen but always think before u speak, or in this case check before u comment.

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    May 17, 2019 06:59 AM

    Jessica Bezuidenhout

    Shayna this story was Amazing cant wait to read the next part of the series =D

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    May 17, 2019 02:05 PM

    Shayna Bhattacharjee#awsomeandbestwriter❤️💎

    thanks! you and your girl gang series rock too!

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    May 19, 2019 12:16 PM

    Sumitra Shah #thebestlittlewriteralso best

    Yeah girl gang does rock

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    May 24, 2019 06:47 AM

    Jessica Bezuidenhout

    THANKS!!

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    May 24, 2019 06:46 AM

    Jessica Bezuidenhout

    TY!!

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    Jun 04, 2019 09:49 AM

    #theamazingandbest… AADYA!🥰🥳💃🏻🏃🏻‍♀️

    U can write about some mystical creature with magic powers! And when u meet it, how u get past it!

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    Jun 04, 2019 11:12 AM

    Shayna Bhattacharjee#awsomeandbestwriter❤️💎

    thanks a lot! i will do that !

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    Jun 05, 2019 06:03 PM

    Shayna Bhattacharjee#awsomeandbestwriter❤️💎

    it will be published by Friday or Saturday !

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