Jun 05, 2019

A secret door to candy land

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Hi , I am Dolly ! Today, I will tell you about my experience to the candy world . I was playing in my room . Then , I started to jump on my bed . I was jumping when I bumped into the wall . The part of the wall I bumped in started to slowly turn into a passage . I think it was begging to me for coming in . I couldn’t control myself and went in . I kept walking and reached an area nobody will think is real ! The candy world ! Everything there was made of candy , like -cotton candy clouds , marshmallow sheep , wafer doors etc . It was just ... mouth watering ! Suddenly , a man made of chocolate walked up to me and asked me who I was . I told him my name and where I am from and asked him the same question . He told me that he was the king of this planet . His name was Chocan . He told me that the name of this planet is Zuba-Zuba . They welcomed me and offered me an ice cream turkey for lunch . I loved to stay there but I couldn’t .... it was just ..... impossible ! I told the people there that I have to go home as my mom will get worried if I don’t return back home before dinner. I just couldn’t believe that I really went there , it was the best experience of my life ! This is all for now ! Bye - bye friends !

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    Jun 07, 2019 12:19 AM

    Fabiha Kamali Siddiqui

    I loved the story Dolly( Prisha Agrawal ). Maybe you should do a part 2 since the story is great.

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    Jun 07, 2019 06:58 AM

    Prisha Agrawal

    Thanks!And yes , I will try do also do a part 2

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