Aug 02, 2019

Poem : the earth

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A blue planet that supports life ,

A green land , beautiful and lovely.


There is a layer called ozone ,

let’s make our place a green zone.


It has oceans it bears,

the calming rustle of leaves you can hear.


this is the place where we belong,

conserve it so it can last long

    5 Replies to "Poem : the earth"

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    Aug 04, 2019 04:40 AM

    Emily Bath

    I love earth 🌏

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    Aug 04, 2019 11:58 AM

    Prisha Agrawal

    Thank you.....

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    Aug 05, 2019 08:27 AM

    Emily Bath

    your welcome

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    Aug 05, 2019 08:29 AM

    Emily Bath

    can you please enter my competition please. it is called the competition number 2

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    Aug 05, 2019 10:11 PM

    Emily Bath

    thanks for entering

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    Aug 14, 2019 08:57 PM

    Disha Ramachandran

    Very beautiful.I love this poem

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    Aug 20, 2019 03:42 PM

    Prisha Agrawal

    Thanks a lot Disha...

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  • A very nice poem that I couldn't even think of.You made me love Earth even more than I already do.It is very inspiring.Thank you for writing this beautiful poem. -Disha R

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