Sep 17, 2019

The mystery visitor


l'm Tom and l am 25 years old. l lived alone,but one day there was a visitor.he was a tough guy and full of muscles.he said that l must meet him turommow night.

Once he l was scared.l was thinking about many thoughts like what is he going to do with me???!!!is he a ghost????finally l overcome my fears l told myself to be brave.

The next day at evening l was trying to think of ideas of what is he going to do the first thought l think about is he is going to kill me but l don't belive in that so l called the police.

When the police reach ,the tough guy also came. He jump in shock and ran away.The police manage to catch him and told me that he is the most dangerous robber in the world he is making a plan to still your money.

After the police capture the robber.finally l got my good life back

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    Sep 17, 2019 01:10 PM

    Ethan Tan Sajid

    hope you enjoy my story

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    Nov 03, 2019 04:25 AM

    Imaiboon Chawalitruangrith


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    Apr 21, 2020 01:12 AM

    Ethan Tan Sajid

    l know, sorry

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