Oct 04, 2019

Cinder-Ella

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If you're interested in stories with happy endings,you'd be better off reading some other book. But,as always,chances are you're curious and want to read this book whether you're interested in happy endings or not. Well,those who are fairy-tale readers,might be a little disappointed. But, I'm going to unveiled the truth about Cinderella.

As far as we know,Cinderella had married the prince and left the wicked stepmother and her stepsisters and lives happily ever after. No. That does not happen.

The story starts by the invitation arriving at Ella's house. Now,let's get some facts straight. Cinderella is called Ella. The "Cinder" is just made up. The stepmother is nice woman. The stepsisters.....well,they are just OK. And,the most important fact of all - Ella has no notion for the prince. Also,there is no fairy godmother.

Now,back to the story.

All three girls go to the ball. Now,one of the sisters had made herself look the most beautiful girl of all times,so that she could win the prince's heart. The prince dances with the beautiful-looking sister,while Ella sits, sulking, because she is bored.

Two days later,the prince and the stepsister are married. Ella is happy,because it means she has more room to herself in the house.

Two months later,the prince dies. He dies because he ate mushroom soup. Mushroom soup can't kill anyone,you say. Well,there was a toadstool among mushrooms,and the cook didn't see because he had lost his glasses. Ella's stepsister didn't get poisoned because she didn't like mushrooms and didn't drink the soup.

So,Ella's stepsister moves back in,and they lived together,until they died.

Now,where is the "Happily ever after" in the story?

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    Oct 06, 2019 06:40 AM

    Adeen Ahmed

    Rebecca Mary,I'm sorry it wasn't very much detailed! I wrote a long story about it,but it somehow got deleted. Keep looking for more stories of mine!❤️

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    Oct 06, 2019 03:41 PM

    Caitlyn Lee

    Cool story. It was nice to read a different version of cinderella. Keep writing your awesome stories!

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    Oct 07, 2019 01:12 PM

    Adeen Ahmed

    Thanks,Caitlyn Lee! And thanks for following me,too! I quite had to brainstorm thinking up another version of Cinderella!

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    Oct 10, 2019 01:53 PM

    Caitlyn Lee

    Your welcome! I really like your stories. Keep writing!

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    Oct 14, 2019 02:15 AM

    Vedika Trivedi

    Wonderful story Adeen

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  • I absolutely loved this story! Adeen, you always come up with great book ideas and they always come out very well! This story is amazing. you are a very talented author!

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