Oct 15, 2019

THE END (part 1!!!!)


NASA and all of the space agencies all around the globe are rigorously working on rockets and space shuttles for our leave from Earth.Will we survive until they make the evacuation ships. We are suffering from mass destruction like tsunamis, earthquakes, nuclear fusions and intergalactic problems. An asteroid called Q-778 is coming closer and closer to earth by the minute.Even a black hole is entering our solar system. Even if all of these disasters didn't happen, when we go out of the earth's atmosphere will we be able to survive the constant solar storms caused by the red giant known as our sun. Maybe scientific theories are right and we may suffer the big boom theory.We have only got another 3 years until asteroid Q-778 will hit and all of earth shall perish.Global warming is at a much faster rate so that is also an arising disaster for us mankind.There is a a % chance that earth may survive the destruction of asteroid Q-778. Maybe the earth will turn into a donut for our sun to munch on or a normal doughnut floating around the sun. As for the moon, it will probably merge into the earth.We are travelling to a completely different solar system or maybe even a different galaxy. That is classified information only known by the space agencies and all governments of countries. Will we survive all these disasters,these disasters are fatal for a lot of the regions on our soon to be doughnut planet.

Please wait for the 2nd part to release shortly. THANK YOU

    2 Replies to "THE END (part 1!!!!)"

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    Oct 28, 2019 02:35 PM

    Adeen Ahmed

    Um, I didn't understand what exactly was going on. You should include more space in your story, punctuation,etc.

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    Nov 25, 2019 06:52 PM

    Sofie Dossi

    COOL well done

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