May 13, 2020

Frozen

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One day Joey and Mila went to the beach with Addy. It was summer in the USA (well, they thought it was summer!) and the girls looked in their bags for their tennis rackets. They jumped in the water and gasped because it was so warm! They shook their heads and remembered what they wanted to play. Joey took the ball and threw it to Mila.


Suddenly the edge of the water began to feel cold. They ran out. The sky went black. It began to snow. Joey and Mila and Addy ran to their towel. They called for help.


At that moment Firesaur happened to be flying over the U.S.A. He saw the winter snow below on the beach. Firesaur is a dinosaur that can breathe fire and fly. He has lots of abilities that he often uses to help people, but he never often uses his fire powers which is very unusual because if you had fire powers you would use them often. He flew down to see what was going on. As he landed, he saw the girls. The girls ran to him and told him everything. He took a deep breath and blew so much fire that he couldn’t see where he was going. Finally, he finished melting the ice and then the girls jumped into the water. They jumped right back out. They were ice blocks, at least they looked like one.


That evening the girls walked home from the beach, discussing how sad they were that Firesaur had to go home. Then Joey had a train of thought. She remembered that it was her birthday in a few weeks. They both ran home as fast as they could to write down the things that they had thought of for Joey’s birthday.


A few weeks later, it was the night before Joey’s birthday. After supper the girls went in the bath, discussing what Joey wanted to do the next day. They got out and put on their pyjamas and went to the sink to brush their teeth. After that, they went to the lounge to say goodnight to their parents.


The next day was Joey’s birthday. At the party, there were lots of treats. When it was time to sing Happy Birthday, the firelighter wasn’t working. At that time, Firesaur was flying by. Firesaur could see that the firelighter was not working so he flew down to help. He took a deep breath and lit the candle. After cake they played some games, had dinner and they all slept in the lounge and watched a movie and then fell asleep.


In the morning they had pancakes with chocolate sauce. While Lila, their mother, was making pancakes she said to Joey, “Happy Winter birthday!”.

The two girls looked face to face and giggled. Now they knew why the water had gone cold.

“Anna! Your mom is here! Kate! Your dad is here” said Mila.

Everyone went home. The day was over. The girls ate their dinner, brushed teeth, brushed hair, bathed, said goodnight and went to bed. That night they had a dream. Firesaur was at their window. The girls hopped on Firesaur’s back and went to a magical place called Fireland. It was the most wonderful dream.


So now, close your eyes and dream of what you think happened next.


The end


I hope you enjoyed this and look out for my next story. This book is written by a 7 year old, Imogen Grace Lee. 

    2 Replies to "Frozen"

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    May 13, 2020 02:53 PM

    Caitlyn Lee

    This is an excellent story Imogen! Best sister ever! Well done

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    May 20, 2020 02:42 PM

    Ava Carruthers

    i really enjoyed your book imogen i hope you make another book

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  • Imogen you are such an amazing author! You are only seven years old and you are aleady writing awesome stories. I am very proud to be your sister!! This book has a very good structure. You have used lot's of good words and you have really thought of every little detail. You describe it so well I feel like I a taking part. Well done. I can't wait to read more of your books!!!

  • Imogen you are such an amazing author! You are only seven years old and you are aleady writing awesome stories. I am very proud to be your sister!! This book has a very good structure. You have used lot's of good words and you have really thought of every little detail. You describe it so well I feel like I a taking part. Well done. I can't wait to read more of your books!!!

  • I gave you five stars because I liked your book

  • Wow! I love all the clever words you used in your story! You know just where to use full stops and capital letters so it was easy to read. My favourite part was when the water got all icy and then I just knew something exciting was going to happen. I can't wait to read your next story.

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