Jul 08, 2020

Just mum & me👧🏻👩🏻💞


We didn't do anything special today

just mum and me

raining ☔🌧outside, nowhere to go🚫🚘🚗🚙🚋🚃🚫

just mum and me

So we baked and talked and talked and baked🎂🧁

and baked and talked🔉

just mum and me

She told me about when she was young

and how her gran baked exactly the same cakes

on rainy days and baked and talked to her.🙂

She remembered her friends and the games they used to play

the trees they used to climb🌳🌲

the blackberries they picked🍒

the fields they used to run around in.🌾

And mum smiled a smile I often never see😁

the years falling away from her face🙂

she did a dance of glee🤩

just mum and me

We didn't do anything special....

But it was special, really special😊😍🥰

...Just mum and me👩🏻👧🏻

    2 Replies to "Just mum & me👧🏻👩🏻💞"

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    Feb 22, 2021 12:50 PM

    Paige Bull

    I love this

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    Feb 24, 2021 02:11 PM

    Adwita Kunnath Akhil

    Very nice poem about your relation with you and your mom

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