Apr 10, 2021

Losing memory

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Once upon a time, there was a girl called Lara. Everyone in her village likes her kindness. She was a brilliant student at school. She was also a caring girl. She usually helps her mom do the washing and cook. One day, she woke up very early in the morning to help prepare the breakfast. ‘’Lara, it’s too early. You can go back to sleep,’’ Said Mom. ‘’But I want to help you, Mom,’’ said the girl. ‘’Oh, thank you sweetheart,’’ said Mom. Then Dad woke up to go to work. ‘’I am going to work. I will just have my breakfast and drink some water,’’ said Dad yawning. ‘’Eggs, water, bag! Everything is ready Dad,’’ said Lara. ‘’Thank you, Lara! You always help,’’ said Dad. ‘’Happy to help,’’ replied the girl cheerfully. Every weekend, Lara goes to the supermarket. After doing the shopping she looks for homeless people to give them some food. One day, she helped her mum with the laundry and asked her if she can go to the supermarket and buy some food for the homeless people. On the way to the supermarket, she fell into a chasm. She hit her head and fainted. Mum was worried as Lara didn’t go back home. On her way to the supermarket Mum saw the chasm. When she got close to it, she heard the groaning of a little girl. She looked inside. It was Lara! ‘’Oh, dear! I’ll call an ambulance,’’ said the Mum. The mom called an ambulance and they brought Lara to the hospital. The doctor said: ‘’She needs to rest. You can come to visit her tomorrow.’’ The mom was really worried about her child. The next day, mom and dad came to visit Lara. They tried to talk to her, but she didn’t recognize them. ‘’Who are you?! Where am I?’’ said Lara. She has lost her memory. Mom said, ‘’Don’t you remember me my dear? I am your mom!’’ Lara answered, ‘’No! I don’t know you.’’ ‘’I…I think Lara has lost her memory,’’ said dad sorrowfully. The doctor came in and said, ‘’time is over. You can come again tomorrow.’’ Mom and dad were really worried about Lara. Before leaving, they asked the doctor, ‘’Doctor when can Lara come back home? Has she lost her memory?’’ ‘’Yes, she has lost her memory,” answered the doctor regretfully. “She can go back home in three days. You can show her old pictures at home so that she could get her memory back,’’ added the doctor. Lara is finally at home. Her best friend Lily tried to show her old photos of them. They all tried to help her get her memory back.

    7 Replies to "Losing memory"

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    Apr 10, 2021 08:05 PM

    Manel Taher

    very nice story❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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    Apr 10, 2021 08:17 PM

    Yassine Améra

    An astonishing and amazing Story, keep it up ❤️

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    Apr 11, 2021 08:58 AM

    Yasmine Channouf

    Thank you ❤️

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    Apr 11, 2021 10:24 AM

    Khadija Miermar

    Amazing story! Love this!

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    Apr 11, 2021 10:29 AM

    Chaymae Faouzi

    i love the plot! very creative i really like it!!!!

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    Apr 11, 2021 10:30 AM

    Chaymae Faouzi

    good job ❤️👏

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    Apr 11, 2021 10:33 AM

    A B

    very good story

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