Apr 22, 2021

my freaky uncle


yesterday after school i got home and took of my shos. my uncle was on the sofa and he tell me to sit down. i was confuse but i sit down anyway. he give me lollypop to sit down so i sit down he toutched me innapropriatley

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    Apr 29, 2021 06:09 AM

    Ethan Tan Sajid

    ummmmm, what do you mean by "Touched me inapporiately"

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    May 07, 2021 11:03 AM

    Ethan Tan Sajid

    Hi, if this story is real, please report to ur parents but if this is fake then nvm

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