Jun 20, 2021

Harry potter part 1


Harry potter chapter 1

There was boy name harry potter but his partens died when he was small so he lived with is massi but his massi never let him do anything and his massi child always disturb him . One day he got a meassege to join hogwarts when he was going so he met a boy who is also in hog warts so the ticket was of platform no 9 they went near a wall and they ran inside a wall and reached platform no 9 . When they sat on a train and then they were about to reach so a girl call Harmoine said harry potter to where is dress .When they reach there so they were divided in 3 group . 

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