Sep 19, 2021

My experience of getting a cough


I ever get a cough. It's about 1 month ago. I get sick because of my little sister. My little sister has a cough and a runny nose and a few days later I get a cough because of her. So from that day I wear mask so the rest of my family don't get a cough or a runny nose. When I get the cough, I feel very sick and I feel like it's hard to eat because I cough a lot when I want to eat. To get a rid of a cough in my experience, you need to eat fruits 3 times a day. Then you also need to drink medicine. I know it taste bitter, but you want to feel better right? So drink medicine then to get better. And the last thing is wear mask so the other member of your family doesn't get the ill. Thanks for listening to my story. So if you get cough to, you need to remember what I told you to prevent from cough. See you later!

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    Sep 20, 2021 05:52 AM

    annisa inaya

    An impressive advice form Indonesian. You have dedicated effort and produce the illnesses experience in fine style. Bravo!

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  • Assalamualaikum, Meiyra. I like your style writing your illnesses experience. A well-developed theme! Let's improve your writing desire and other may appreciate it much.


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